Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Is It Love

Does love feel like 
a gentle touch
felt upon an evening breeze
has you so sad and lost 
whenever they turn to leave
when they are near do you 
need to take a seat
does your heart skip 
every other beat
and after its all said 
and done
does your being feel 
like they're the one
will one ever 
know for a fact
Can you tell by how 
you two interact
how does one know their 
feelings they can trust
can we tell the difference 
between what is 
love or what is lust

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Gordon Mcconnell October 25, 2019 at 4:29 PM Nice piece Brenda, well penned with interesting question. Love goes far deeper while lust is only on the surface. That's how I would see the two ! And of course love lasts far longer. Blessings hugs, Gordon Brenda Chiri October 26, 2019 at 11:08 PM Oh Gordon thank you my dear friend I always love your comments! ;)

John Fleming October 25, 2019 at 7:46 AM Hhmmm? I myself am somewhat in slight disagreement with Paul's stated espousal...but, of course, I do understand and agree, to some greater or lesser extent, with the underlying sentiment expressed. Mind you, having read what I have just wrote...to hell with it -- your probably right, Paul! Lol P.s now for the serious bit -- really good poetry, Poetess!! :) john Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 1:45 PM Hahahaha! John thank you for your warm even if a bit confused comment! Lol! Always bringing a smile to my lips John!;)warm hugs!;)

Paul Callus October 24, 2019 at 1:28 PM I believe that love and lust most of the time walk hand in hand, Brenda, but when 'after it's all said and done' one still yearns for the other, then it certainly is love! Hugs // paul Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 3:42 PM Well when I grow up (hahaha) I hope to find that kinda love!;) thank you Paul!;)

Chris Green October 24, 2019 at 8:12 AM I think often it is a little bit of both. Nicely done Brenda. Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 9:02 AM Chris I do believe if you can keep the lust in it then your good! Thank you!;)

Jan Allison October 24, 2019 at 3:30 AM An interesting question Brenda, guess we have to experience it to know love for real:-) Hugs Jan xx Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 9:01 AM Yea Jan I think your probably right!;)

Regina Mcintosh October 24, 2019 at 2:41 AM YES... Love this. Awesome poem. God bless you, Gina Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 9:01 AM Thank you Regina!;)