Is It Going To Rain

The wind calls your name
Dark clouds on the plain
Gusty wind in my heart
Blowing us apart

Is it going to rain?
Can you feel my pain?
Is it going to rain?
I think I’m going insane?
Tell me is it going rain?

Calm before the storm
Chance upon a breeze
Whisper in the night
I want to hold you tight?

I can feel the weather 
In my bones
It’s telling me 
I’ll be alone 

Tell me is it going to rain?
Tell me can you feel my pain?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 7:42 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Stephen
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Stephen, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
Kilmer Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Thanks SKAT, I am honored! I appreciate your support of my work. ~Kilmer
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 11:09 AM
- Although I do not like the rain ..... this was beautiful, Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thomas Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Lovely write kilmer,,,, a sweet melody in every line:0) ty4sharing <3 cherie,,,,
Kilmer Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Thanks Cherie. Your comments mean so much to me. I hope to make it into a country song and record it soon. Always ~Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Your keyboard must have been sizzling when you wrote this.~ Stunning ~ Intoxicating~ caliente ~ Going in my faves :)
Kilmer Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Well with that review I shall pursue it to fruition. Thanks for the vote of confidence. ~Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 8:23 PM
It's simply beautiful with sweet emotion that evokes deep feelings. Sounds like a hit to me :)
Kilmer Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 8:16 PM
I was thinking about a love song that was maybe a little country. I was definitely thinking about unrequited love. If you know what i mean ;). I just put some chords to it on the guitar and if I could sing (which I can't) it might be a hit (or a least in my dreams). ~Kilmer~
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace