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Is It Going To Rain

The wind calls your name Dark clouds on the plain Gusty wind in my heart Blowing us apart Is it going to rain? Can you feel my pain? Is it going to rain? I think I’m going insane? Tell me is it going rain? Calm before the storm Chance upon a breeze Whisper in the night I want to hold you tight? I can feel the weather In my bones It’s telling me I’ll be alone Tell me is it going to rain? Tell me can you feel my pain?

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/31/2014 7:42:00 AM

wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Stephen

Skat A

Date: 1/28/2014 1:10:00 PM

Stephen, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 1/28/2014 4:20:00 PM

Thanks SKAT, I am honored! I appreciate your support of my work. ~Kilmer

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2013 11:09:00 AM

- Although I do not like the rain ..... this was beautiful, Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas

Date: 9/8/2013 8:58:00 PM

Lovely write kilmer,,,, a sweet melody in every line:0) ty4sharing <3 cherie,,,,

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/8/2013 9:00:00 PM

Thanks Cherie. Your comments mean so much to me. I hope to make it into a country song and record it soon. Always ~Kilmer

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/8/2013 8:09:00 PM

Your keyboard must have been sizzling when you wrote this.~ Stunning ~ Intoxicating~ caliente ~ Going in my faves :)

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/8/2013 8:28:00 PM

Well with that review I shall pursue it to fruition. Thanks for the vote of confidence. ~Kilmer

Karen Anglesey
Date: 9/8/2013 8:23:00 PM

It's simply beautiful with sweet emotion that evokes deep feelings. Sounds like a hit to me :)

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/8/2013 8:16:00 PM

I was thinking about a love song that was maybe a little country. I was definitely thinking about unrequited love. If you know what i mean ;). I just put some chords to it on the guitar and if I could sing (which I can't) it might be a hit (or a least in my dreams). ~Kilmer~