Is It Friday Yet

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Two o'clock pm

best time ever for a nap

eyes glazing over.

Maybe some coffee

will ward off the impending

risk to my income.

Twenty short minutes

of break from day spinnits

would help me perform.

Unfortunately

unconventionality

is workplacely scorned.

Two o'clock pm best time ever for a nap eyes glazing over. Maybe some coffee will ward off the impending risk to my income. Twenty short minutes of break from office spinnits would help me perform. Unfortunately unconventionality is workplacely scorned. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by Nancy Jones between naps on Saturday, August 20, 2011

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Sidney Beck

Date: 8/24/2011 6:54:00 PM

here's one for you...it's a real true story from my work....they tell me one of the older guys used to fall asleep regularly on the job....was reported to the boss....( get this !)...she offered to increase his salary if he would stay awake .... like W H A A A T ??

Tony Lane

Date: 8/21/2011 8:00:00 AM

I told my boss I'd give back one of my weeks of vacation if I could take a 40 minute nap in the afternoon He said no. Tony

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2011 5:59:00 AM

love the way you built the mood here, nancy.. i'm an afternoon girl, so i'm wide awake till midnight... winning streaks for this amazing stufff! :) huggs,nette