Is It a Dream

A dream is never just a dream        Fractured lies and untold truths         Fear of 
the unknown        Infantile thoughts         Progressing through hostile 
youths        A clouded vision of many       Every night to be seen       This 
nightmare that we all call a dream       Before we know it        In the blink of an 
eye         Father time is upon us       Hearing our pleas of one more        One 
more        Before we ..............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 7:22 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
A  Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 9:13 PM
RICHARD, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
Ferry Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:51 PM
thanks Skat Rick
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:10 PM
oh my it looks like you got up a new one that I never saw yet. The ending is very cool because that is just how life will end for most. Abruptly. Congrats on your win.
Ferry Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Good to see you..Haven`t written much..Real busy
A   Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 1:18 AM
Hi Richard, AGAIN!!! , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA
A   Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:21 AM
RICHARD, it's beautiful to dream.... lovely... Linda
A   Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:50 AM
(((This is a copy paste note to every poet, PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE A REPLY ON THIS COMMENT. I'm not being rude, 95% of the time, I never come back to read the reply you left on my comment. If for some reason, you want to give thanks. Let's do it the old fashion way. Drop by and read one of my poems, or send the thanks through soup mail, or just enjoy my visit. As I would yours. I don't enjoy comments on comment's. It takes away from every poet, One day Poetry Soup Will See it.... Have yourself a lovely day.)))
Ferry Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:24 AM
what would happen without our dreams
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 2:54 AM
- I wish you only good dreams - well written Richard. - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ferry Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Hello Anne........
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