Is He There With Me

I see him sometime come through the kitchen door,
Sometimes standing looking over garden ledge,

He wakes me some nights by appearing in dreams,
Ever so often jolts me by his absence!

Tense silence surrounds me without his laughter,
How very much shall miss him from here after,
Every thing in this house reminds me of him,
Right from music to his chair in the corner!
Even garden birds stop, scan for his presence,

Waiting for a handful of seeds he would throw,
Is it possible his soul lurks around me?
Tenderly follows in everything I do?
His mischievous self is capable of that?

My mind still searches but my lonely heart knows,
Eternal love and peace where ever he goes!

1st placement
Written 30/11/2020
Nostalgia acrostic poetry contest
Line Gauthier sponsored
15 lines, 11 syllables each PS syllable counter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Balasubramanian Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. This is beautifully expressed.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Thanks Rama!:)
Kauffman Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations Krish on your first place win. Your acrostic is lovely and tender filled with events and memories all of us can picture. Interwoven in your lines is the deep longing of your heart. It really is beautiful. Blessings!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Thank you Sam!:) Much obliged for your visit and your kind words!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:00 PM
This is stunning.. a true masterpiece in poetry. I love it. God bless you always
Radhakrishna Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 12:17 AM
Thanks Regina! Thanks indeed!:)
Ruwindi Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 12:16 AM
Lovely words... great acrostics.. nostalgic indeed!
Radhakrishna Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 1:50 AM
Thank you Kaveesha! Thanks for stopping by!
Hoffman Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:24 PM
I feel those who have lost a loved one can relate to this piece. Beautifully nostalgic, Krish.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 10:45 PM
Thank you Franci! Appreciate your words of support! Always nice to get such a feedback! Thanks again!:)
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