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Is He Romeo Now

When the pain sets in And your falling apart Not a friend in site Not a soul would care I lie on this pen, to get through this He with her I get that But seems she doesn't get to be the Hidden Ghost Within walls, within pain. Trying everything to get love To get love, why does she get romeo when i did everything's And got nothings One month dating, she pasters his fb wall. He writes xoxo, 3 years i got nothings but seeing him with girls He has my daddys guitar wrap around her and him. Does he even care. Does he think of my tears He with her I get that But she got to meet his friends, be on his wall When i just stood by his side as he could only lie And lay forward his pain as i made the pay Why does it seem she gets Romeo When i get nothings Now its 3 months in for her Often I wonder will the abuse set in As the days turn into years Does she hear about me? He with her I get that But will she ever fear his fist, cry everynight Be left alone in the dark, calling texting for a reply As he appreciate nothing but expects everything Does she even have Romeo ? Soon she will see, soon I will see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/29/2016 12:03:00 AM
The first two lines are a perfect beginning to a lyric, it fits well with a beat. Work on your form at the end, overall its a really nice lyric By the way the guy no Romeo, a butthead i would say.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 12/29/2016 12:20:00 AM
Thanks, i tend to get sloppy at the end of my lyrics. I lack form at the end, always did. But i enjoy writing lyrics so much
Date: 12/28/2016 11:54:00 PM
The first verse is so well pen. Good job, needs a little work on formation but great image for a lyric. Well done.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 12/29/2016 12:21:00 AM
Thank you,

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