Is He Romeo Now

When the pain sets in
And your falling apart
Not a friend in site
Not a soul would care
I lie on this pen, to get through this

He with her I get that
But seems she doesn't get to be the Hidden Ghost
Within walls, within pain. Trying everything to get love
To get love, why does she get romeo when i did everything's 
And got nothings 

One month dating, she pasters his fb wall. 
He writes xoxo, 3 years i got nothings but seeing him with girls
He has my daddys guitar wrap around her and him.
Does he even care. Does he think of my tears

He with her I get that
But she got to meet his friends, be on his wall
When i just stood by his side as he could only lie
And lay forward his pain as i made the pay
Why does it seem she gets Romeo
When i get nothings

Now its 3 months in for her
Often I wonder will the abuse set in
As the days turn into years
Does she hear about me? 

He with her I get that
But will she ever fear his fist, cry everynight
Be left alone in the dark, calling texting for a reply
As he appreciate nothing but expects everything
Does she even have Romeo ?
Soon she will see, soon I will see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cash Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:03 AM
The first two lines are a perfect beginning to a lyric, it fits well with a beat. Work on your form at the end, overall its a really nice lyric By the way the guy no Romeo, a butthead i would say.
Withee Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Thanks, i tend to get sloppy at the end of my lyrics. I lack form at the end, always did. But i enjoy writing lyrics so much
Hans Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 11:54 PM
The first verse is so well pen. Good job, needs a little work on formation but great image for a lyric. Well done.
Withee Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:21 AM
Thank you,
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