Irritates In Feeling

Just in a mode of sensation 
                                              privileged for own desires
                                            communication without wires
                                             not even with remote control 
                                                     but heart to heart
                                          love continues irritates in feeling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:22 AM
This has been a wonderful and clever poem to read this morning. BL. enjoy your day........SKAT
Devnath  Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Thanks a lot for your wonderful comment. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
A   Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Hello BL, wow..that is deep.. your words make a difference... enjoyed.. Linda
Devnath  Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely best friend for your nice uplifting comment. Loved always, bl
Guzzi Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 4:39 PM
love is very confusing! Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your visit to my page and for leaving comment on it. Loved always, bl
Street Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 11:55 AM
Somewhere A Parallel World Exist, My Spiritual Friend...Interesting Poem In Regards Unto, 'Irritating' ? Thanks For Stopping By And, Happy Mother's Day Unto Your's As You Also....Love, Jeremy *
Devnath  Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Thanks a lot again for your uplifting comment. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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