Irritated

Help me smother this irritation ~ with lines and punctuations ~ Feed me pronouns ~ to drown incompetent sounds ~ Nouns to block inevitable frowns ~ verbs to calm nerves ~ Synonyms to perpetuate and penetrate minds ~ antonyms to reiterate in rhyme~ Give me a vocabulary of words to express my perturb ~ why must people be so absurd Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Enjoyed your flight of wishes and words to create awareness Lay good to read you today, how are the Girls..?
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Lay. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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August 16, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Your messages are always expressed so clearly, Lay. I get a bit irritated when it's apparent an author is merely trying to impress us with a vocabulary, while not really saying anything. Awesome poem for my faves, dear. Love, Carolyn
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