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Irresistable Invite

Soft, dewed, sweet, purple lips inviting the admirer to drink pearls of warm, red nectar without crushing – from deep inside Mohan Chutani Contest: THE PASSION OF A JUE JU Date: 25.7.2014

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/5/2014 6:46:00 PM

Oh that is terrifically presented Mohan, well done on your winner!

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/4/2014 8:48:00 PM

Invites one loves to get.. Congrats on your win!!!!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 9:01:00 PM

Thanks Robert for your appreciation. Mohan

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2014 6:49:00 PM

A wonderful invitation to a gentle and appreciative recipient. Lovely word flow and a subtle shift in the last line.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 9:01:00 PM

Thanks John for kind words and encouragement. Mohan

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/4/2014 5:46:00 PM

Passionate, but with a subtle touch !! Well done, Mohan !

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 5:52:00 PM

Carrie, thanks for your encouraging comments. subtlety definitely enhances the joy, I believe. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2014 4:31:00 PM

Your poem's words go well with the title for your poem. Nicely done, and congratulations.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 5:21:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2014 9:55:00 AM

This is passionate plus some more; congratulations on a worthy win, Mohan! // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 9:59:00 AM

Paul, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2014 7:43:00 AM

Well crafted with passion this passionate write, Mohan. congrats

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 9:29:00 AM

Dr. Ram, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2014 7:11:00 AM

Lovely passionate Jue Ju Mohan ! Congrats on win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 9:30:00 AM

Upma, thanks for your wishes. Mohan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2014 4:46:00 AM

Passionate winning Jeu Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 9:30:00 AM

Thanks, Sara for your encouragement. Mohan

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2014 12:27:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan (jadazzle) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 1:31:00 AM

It WAS displayed on the winners page - i got to comment on the last winner and it disappeared and the contest is now back to being 'judged' ... I have mailed Nette about it as I'm totally confused! Hugs Jan xx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/3/2014 8:40:00 PM

Thanks Jan, but cannot see the results for this contest as of now. Mohan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2014 6:47:00 PM

Uniquely expressive..Very passionate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/27/2014 10:19:00 AM

Sara, thanks for liking my write. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 8:21:00 AM

A unique take Mohan perfect to the theme,, gl in contest!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/25/2014 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Upma