Mohan Chutani Poet Verse

Irresistable Invite

Soft, dewed, sweet, purple lips
inviting the admirer to drink
pearls of warm, red nectar 
without crushing – from deep inside





Mohan Chutani
Contest: THE PASSION OF A JUE JU
Date: 25.7.2014

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Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 6:46 PM Oh that is terrifically presented Mohan, well done on your winner!

Robert Lindley August 4, 2014 at 8:48 PM Invites one loves to get.. Congrats on your win!!!! Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:01 PM Thanks Robert for your appreciation. Mohan

John Lawless August 4, 2014 at 6:49 PM A wonderful invitation to a gentle and appreciative recipient. Lovely word flow and a subtle shift in the last line. Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:01 PM Thanks John for kind words and encouragement. Mohan

Carrie Richards August 4, 2014 at 5:46 PM Passionate, but with a subtle touch !! Well done, Mohan ! Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 5:52 PM Carrie, thanks for your encouraging comments. subtlety definitely enhances the joy, I believe. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2014 at 4:31 PM Your poem's words go well with the title for your poem. Nicely done, and congratulations. Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 5:21 PM Andrea, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan

Paul Callus August 4, 2014 at 9:55 AM This is passionate plus some more; congratulations on a worthy win, Mohan! // paul Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:59 AM Paul, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2014 at 7:43 AM Well crafted with passion this passionate write, Mohan. congrats Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:29 AM Dr. Ram, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 7:11 AM Lovely passionate Jue Ju Mohan ! Congrats on win! Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:30 AM Upma, thanks for your wishes. Mohan

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2014 at 4:46 AM Passionate winning Jeu Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:30 AM Thanks, Sara for your encouragement. Mohan

Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 12:27 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan (jadazzle) xx Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 1:31 AM It WAS displayed on the winners page - i got to comment on the last winner and it disappeared and the contest is now back to being 'judged' ... I have mailed Nette about it as I'm totally confused! Hugs Jan xx Mohan Chutani August 3, 2014 at 8:40 PM Thanks Jan, but cannot see the results for this contest as of now. Mohan

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2014 at 6:47 PM Uniquely expressive..Very passionate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Mohan Chutani July 27, 2014 at 10:19 AM Sara, thanks for liking my write. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 25, 2014 at 8:21 AM A unique take Mohan perfect to the theme,, gl in contest! Mohan Chutani July 25, 2014 at 10:40 AM Thanks Upma

Jadazzle United July 25, 2014 at 7:36 AM wonderful write Mohan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx Mohan Chutani July 25, 2014 at 10:41 AM Thanks Jan for your wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2014 at 7:28 AM - Mohan, this is a sweet and romantic small poem - Enjoy reading your words today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Mohan Chutani July 25, 2014 at 10:42 AM Thanks Anne