Paul Callus Poet Lanterne

Irrational

[This poem is based on 2 forms: Lanterne & ABC]


fear
grinds with
heartless greed-
insatiable
jaws


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Light up the Page 4 Contest
Hosted by Joseph May
Placed 4th
© 10th April 2019

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Angela Crabtree December 7, 2020 at 1:34 PM You write these Lanterne poems very well, Paul. Eventually, I'll try to write one :) Paul Callus December 7, 2020 at 2:49 PM I'm looking forward to read your Lanterne poem, Angela:) Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Jack Horne May 12, 2019 at 12:56 PM such truth here, my friend Paul Callus May 12, 2019 at 3:09 PM Thank you, Jack. Hope you had a pleasant weekend, my friend. Regards // paul

Charles Messina April 28, 2019 at 5:45 AM This is great, Paul. Back with the congrats on your fine win. Best Regards, Charlie Paul Callus April 28, 2019 at 3:29 PM Thank you, Charlie. Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2019 at 1:57 PM You did amazing with the form and the restrictions. Love this. Paul Callus April 28, 2019 at 4:03 AM Your complimentary remarks are appreciated, Andrea...thank you! Regards // paul

Joseph May April 27, 2019 at 1:41 PM Very nicely expressed Paul..Congrats on your win.. Paul Callus April 28, 2019 at 4:02 AM Thank you, Joseph. Your contest inspired many worthy entries. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands April 27, 2019 at 1:29 PM Congratulations for your win :) Paul Callus April 28, 2019 at 4:00 AM Thank you, Heidi; read your lovely winning entry yesterday. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2019 at 12:54 PM - Congratulations on your win, Paul :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus April 28, 2019 at 3:59 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos April 22, 2019 at 12:41 PM Great imagery Paul and scary - Your Lanternes rule my friend, all the best in the contest! Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer. Paul Callus April 22, 2019 at 3:22 PM You are too kind, Jenny...thank you, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Susan Ashley April 10, 2019 at 8:28 PM Oh, a deep and gripping poem, my dear friend. You've captured that gnawing feeling of fear with your potent pen and stunning imagery. Best wishes for a win, Paul, and warmest wishes and hugs for you! :)) ~Susan Paul Callus April 11, 2019 at 1:01 PM Thank you, Susan; as always, your insightful comments are a pleasure to read. ¬ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Tom Cunningham April 10, 2019 at 12:05 PM I've found keeping them alphabetical is a real challenge but you've done it well Paul, Good luck. Tom. Paul Callus April 10, 2019 at 1:15 PM Thank you, Tom. Yes, the alphabetical rule does make it trickier! Regards // paul