Irrational

[This poem is based on 2 forms: Lanterne & ABC]


fear
grinds with
heartless greed-
insatiable
jaws


-------------------------------
Light up the Page 4 Contest
Hosted by Joseph May
Placed 4th
© 10th April 2019

fearlanterne

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/7/2020 1:34:00 PM

You write these Lanterne poems very well, Paul. Eventually, I'll try to write one :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/7/2020 2:49:00 PM

I'm looking forward to read your Lanterne poem, Angela:) Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 5/12/2019 12:56:00 PM

such truth here, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2019 3:09:00 PM

Thank you, Jack. Hope you had a pleasant weekend, my friend. Regards // paul

Charles Messina

Date: 4/28/2019 5:45:00 AM

This is great, Paul. Back with the congrats on your fine win. Best Regards, Charlie

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2019 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2019 1:57:00 PM

You did amazing with the form and the restrictions. Love this.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2019 4:03:00 AM

Your complimentary remarks are appreciated, Andrea...thank you! Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 4/27/2019 1:41:00 PM

Very nicely expressed Paul..Congrats on your win..

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2019 4:02:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Your contest inspired many worthy entries. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/27/2019 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations for your win :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2019 4:00:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi; read your lovely winning entry yesterday. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2019 12:54:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Paul :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2019 3:59:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/22/2019 12:41:00 PM

Great imagery Paul and scary - Your Lanternes rule my friend, all the best in the contest! Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2019 3:22:00 PM

You are too kind, Jenny...thank you, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/10/2019 8:28:00 PM

Oh, a deep and gripping poem, my dear friend. You've captured that gnawing feeling of fear with your potent pen and stunning imagery. Best wishes for a win, Paul, and warmest wishes and hugs for you! :)) ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2019 1:01:00 PM

Thank you, Susan; as always, your insightful comments are a pleasure to read. ¬ Warm regards & hugs // paul