Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Poet Narrative

Iris of Poetry

Introduction: We don't really think deep enough about "What A Poetry Actually Is", the
obvious question which we all know but don't think how to really elaborate on. We mostly
see the story, depth and the purpose it delivers. Well, here's one a little bit different
this time...



Poetry is the reflection of our lives like in the mirror,
It is something we can relate to and share.
It's our memories written in jumbled words,
It's like a song, with a meaning it holds.

A mere idea of our mystical lives,
Expressed in a way from deep inside
A way which only the heart can see,
A place where the eyes get cold-feet

The earnest truth and the sweetest lies,
It's all the irony that makes poetry so alive.

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Gary Fields August 1, 2011 at 2:08 PM Take another look at your poetry, Write it, lean on it and do it again in the best of a third person. Let you subconscious take a hold and deliver those thought that are in your soul! Let the Lord offer his grace, and remember that poetry is the thrill of the chase. When writing, step away, and find out what you gestation period is. SEE my poem called TRUE POETRY -OR-WHAT IS POETRY. And remember your friends' in the pen/G.FIELDS Keep the write-up, up! Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 7:14 PM thanks for the info. I did this in 1st person because I wanted to get a hold of the audience as such they are living along with the presence of me.

Dana Smith July 31, 2011 at 12:16 AM :) very nice. Dana'lynn Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 7:15 PM appreciate your compliment!

Joshua Lacey July 27, 2011 at 7:35 PM waking up to reality already :) Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 7:16 PM That's good to hear ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2011 at 7:19 AM A very interesting and enjoyable read Aqeb. Thank you for sharing with us. Hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 7:18 PM No I should Thank You, because It's the comments from you and the support that fills me with inspiration!

Doris Culverhouse July 13, 2011 at 8:30 PM Enjoyed reading your work....very nice!! Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 7:23 PM I'm truly grateful...