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Iris Fernand

Long ago in a faraway land, There lived a man, named Iris Fernand. He was a handsome man yet so proud, "Get out of my way,"he would say aloud. His name was high and status great, Poor was he though in conduct and fate. Cruelty was his sword and pride his armor, Worse he became with each hour, Then something happened quite unexpected, To the one who was widely detested. Days passed by and no one saw him out, A man came up and shouted aloud, "Iris is now on his way to hell," They hugged and wished each other well. Everyone hated Iris for he was too proud, And no one was willing to give him even a shroud. He lies down and pays now in hell for his deeds, For his life was malicious, full of greeds.

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Date: 9/24/2017 11:51:00 AM
A really beautiful written poem, I really like the poems that have rhyming in them and your is perfect, for a story, for rhythem, everything is perfect in this poem, real beauty is the main s character and we should judge everyone by his/her character, not by face or wealth, seems like you are new here, so I shouod welcome you to this site, you re really going to love your stay here and it s nice to see someone from pakistan as I m also from Pakistan, I ll read your other poems also, good luck
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:27:00 PM
Sounds like an awful man.. Great write, welcome to poetry soup..
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