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Iridescent Ruby

sipping sweet syrup
ruby throated hummingbird ~
flower flutterer



August 23rd, 2020
Haiku - Color With Alliteration
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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David Holmes

August 28, 2020 at 11:58 AM

Jenna - Congratulations on your win - I love this Haiku- well penned. David

Paula Goldsmith

August 27, 2020 at 2:55 PM

Congratulations on your win. A few words with much said. A wonderful write/poem. I love it. Enjoy your win and day..............

Jenna Logan

August 27, 2020 at 5:55 PM

Thank you very much, Paula.

Jan Allison

August 27, 2020 at 8:47 AM

way to go jenna, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

August 27, 2020 at 5:54 PM

Thank you, Jan.

Tania Kitchin

August 27, 2020 at 6:25 AM

Jenna, congratulations on your podium placement, a beautiful haiku, great alliterations!

Jenna Logan

August 27, 2020 at 5:49 PM

Thank you very much, Tania. I'm honored.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 24, 2020 at 2:43 AM

- A wonderful haiku, Jenna :) - ... "sipping sweet syrup" - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

August 24, 2020 at 12:30 PM

It seems to be a bit of a tongue twister. lol Thanks, Anne-Lise.

John Gondolf

August 23, 2020 at 6:50 PM

Beautiful imagery, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. Be safe. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan

August 24, 2020 at 1:46 AM

Thanks so much, John. I appreciate your concern.

Jan Allison

August 23, 2020 at 2:34 PM

a joy to read the imagery is divine Jenna:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

August 23, 2020 at 4:38 PM

Thank you so so much, Jan. From what I've seen so far the competition is hard. I've never placed better than 3rd in one of Tania's contests, so I'll not expect more.