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Iridescent Crow

iridescent crow
sits near top in pecan tree..
nuts cracked under tires 

intelligent bird
has cars and trucks do his work..
training future flock

naturehaiku

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Kathryn Collins

October 19, 2012 at 8:53 AM

Wait a minute, Sara - these are two more of the best Haiku I've ever read. These are a pleasure to read on a rainy morning with no cawing. love, Kathy

Harry Horsman

October 19, 2012 at 7:15 AM

you are so right Sara, the old crow, got to be the bees knees of intelligence.. like this poem.....

Modupe Sefunmi

October 19, 2012 at 2:49 AM

Lovely Haiku! Really wish to perfect each of my Haikus

Vesna Kovrlija

October 18, 2012 at 9:33 PM

Lovely poem!

Cynthia Alvez

October 18, 2012 at 6:52 PM

Lovely and clever haiku Sara, Beauty in all of God's creatures... Cynthia

Kash Poet

October 18, 2012 at 6:48 PM

Haha...very witty haiku here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Ilene Bauer

October 18, 2012 at 4:34 PM

nice one! very clever birds and very well-written poem!

Russell Sivey

October 18, 2012 at 3:39 PM

You are right...crows are very intelligent birds! That's why we try to scare them off with scarecrows but how it rarely works! We had scarecrows up to fend them off from out of our sweet corn but they still managed to get in, ugh it's so frustrating at times! This write is a wonderful and delightful write! I really enjoyed your clever and masterfully written Haiku! Great Work!!

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