Irene

she lingers awhile
her breath sways trees to and fro
clinging to power

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Carolyn Devonshire

May 15, 2012 at 12:53 PM

Yes, I agree with Andrea. The personification is overpowering as we remember the power of Hurricane Irene. I think I've just read the winner! Best wishes in the contest, Carol. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

May 15, 2012 at 12:53 PM

Yes, I agree with Andrea. The personification is overpowering as we remember the power of Hurricane Irene. I think I've just read the winner! Best wishes in the contest, Carol. Love, Carolyn

Carol Fillmore

May 15, 2012 at 1:07 PM

which contest? I seem to be missing something somewhere LOL

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2012 at 9:51 PM

GREAT personification, Carol.

Carol Fillmore

May 14, 2012 at 10:11 PM

Thank you Andrea! I enjoyed reading your latest sonnet today (er yesterday, it's past midnight her lol) ... thanks for posting this! Been very slack with the haikus, tankas etc etc, time to get the pen moving:)