Ireland Cool Rain

In the mist of the storm__rainbow
Mount the rainbow go
To the land of rocky clifts__rain
Cool, clean water my gain
Land of temperatures cool rule
For Northern Lights sight drool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 2, 2010 at 11:47 PM
This sure is beautiful and you've combined so many amazing natural occurrences here, storms, rainbows & the Northern Lights-- ah those Northern Lights are something that I have yet to witness but I sure am hoping I could in the future!! very nice Sara :) -- nikko :)
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August 2, 2010 at 9:27 PM
very Irishy with the rainbows and the mist and the rocky cliffs! How are you, Sara? Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 6:24 PM
A lovely write. You takes me there.
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 5:35 PM
A nice pen picture with apt images , Sara
Chachere Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 2:58 PM
a weather so cool(: if its rain, its still great, even if the water & its wild storm is overwhelming. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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August 2, 2010 at 11:36 AM
A great piece Sara.. like the line breaks to give the reader a perspective on the next word of power... very illusive and whimsical too.. enjoyed a creative read from your gifted pen today.. with luv..
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