Derani Blackburn Poet Rhyme

Iq Zero

I think about technology..
How advanced it's become.
Has it made us any smarter?
Or has it really made us dumb?

We hold in our hands..
A small mobile device.
It's become our daily lifeline..
But think about the price..?

We've paid with our intellect..
No longer having to think.
We ask Siri and ask Google..
In time our brain will shrink.

We no longer have recall..
Or make decisions alone.
Constantly looking at that screen..
Being controlled by a mobile phone.

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the barefoot bard April 13, 2026 at 11:56 PM the barefoot bard April 14, 2026 at 12:02 AM Good day Derani. I just wrote a poem about the mobile phones a couple of days ago with the title Nodders is this a species of Bird. I like the whole poem but what stands out " "in time our brain will shrink" Blessings Douglas the barefoot bard April 14, 2026 at 12:02 AM And it's a great title