Iowa Corn Field Bandit

dark masked marauder devoured sweet corn at night crows left hungry

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/25/2021 8:44:00 PM

Kind of hilarious when you think about it: 'Animal Antics.' Good one, Caren. Quite the clever haiku! ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/25/2021 10:18:00 PM

They are something else!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/25/2021 1:53:00 PM

those raccoons are really sneaky, aren't they? great poem, caren...

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/25/2021 10:18:00 PM

I think they are all over the midwest, and they like me a lot.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2021 6:59:00 AM

I don't like crows but wouldn't ever show them my feelings, do you know if you do them an injustice, they remember you and pass it down from generation until some day one of them takes revenge somehow on that particular person. But I don't want humans, animals, reptiles, birds etc. to ever suffer and be hungry, it's sad the crows went hungry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/25/2021 10:19:00 PM

crows are something else, very smart apparently and vindictive.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/25/2021 2:39:00 AM

Great Haiku, Caren, and sorry for the crows to be left hungry, Have a great weekend.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/25/2021 10:18:00 PM

I have raccoons on my porch nightly looking for cat food.