Home » Poems » Ray Dillard » Invitation To Mankind

Invitation To Mankind

Elements of space-
Galaxies spin on diamonds,
Beckoning mankind.

naturespacehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2011 at 2:08 PM

this is really cool, Ray!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 12, 2011 at 4:39 AM

A wonderful write Ray .. good luck on your new book and much success.. so happy to see u doing something u so luv ... and enjoying the process of publishing too... keep us posted my friend... wishing u great sales and great success and always luv..

Nette Onclaud

April 12, 2011 at 4:04 AM

powerful. glowing write, ray.. much enjoyed! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

April 8, 2011 at 11:42 PM

wanted to thank you on your nice blog comment and when I can, I'll do a review on your book!

Roxanna Johnson

April 5, 2011 at 11:56 AM

i liked this (:

Dana Smith

April 2, 2011 at 4:55 PM

"Galaxies spin on diamonds" hmm I really love that.

Eiken Laan

March 29, 2011 at 10:46 AM

Ray, this is wonderful, congrats on your win.

Kash Poet

March 29, 2011 at 9:28 AM

Excellent imagery!Congrats Ray on your win---kashinath

Audrey Haick

March 28, 2011 at 6:15 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ray! That colorful swirl of amazing light does seem to be beckoning. Always, Annalise

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2011 at 1:05 PM

Spinning on diamonds!!!! How much I love that line....such a lovely description! Congratulations, Ray !!

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 28, 2011 at 12:47 PM

Congratulations on the 11th place win in the contest of Rick, Ray

Carolyn Devonshire

March 28, 2011 at 12:46 PM

Great use of the metaphor describing stars as "diamonds," Ray. For as long as I can remember, space has been beckoning our exploration. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

March 28, 2011 at 12:26 PM

Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Ray. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2011 at 12:03 PM

Congrats Ray on your wonderful win in Rick's contest my friend and partner... elegant entry and excellent portrayal of the cool photo presented for the contest.. enjoy with luv..