Invitation For My Brother (R.I.P.)

Idk if you can see me.I realy pray you do.For i am sending an invitation for all the days i can 
not see you.At my last game id like you to be there,ill be dissapointed if i cant smell u in the 
air.When im sworn into the army i better hear you say,sis...you gon be somebody 
someday.When i graduate from basic training and become a soldier.Id like you to stand 
beside me,sholder to sholder.Guard me on missions,protect me like you always did,always 
ur little sis..always a little kid.b4 i go last i must say,be waiting arms wide open the day i 
come your way.
LOVE,SIS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jackson Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 8:36 PM
My dad died when I was 15 & I have these same feelings. I not only will be proud when I conquer my dreams but I will be imagining his face in the clouds above me. I know he's rooting for me to succeed just like your brother is for you. Good lick in the army.
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:29 AM
I kant Tell You how much remorse i have For Yous.Really touchin',7oobi(My Love)<3
Loveless Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 9:16 AM
This Makes Me Wanna Cry. And Sis I Salute You. Be Strong. Be Safe. And Come Home After Your Done Your Job. Peace. Boo
Goff Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 8:28 PM
Rebecca, hits me like a letter from the front, pick-a-war, a classic style thru the years, really well done! Jim
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