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Invitation

F-riends or enemies do come along too
R-ise with me higher than yesterday.

E-asily seen here acknowledged by a wave
E-asily noticed there by a nod of the head.

D-esire actions that ring just and fair
O-nly free for the doing.

M-emories for all.

       Jeannie Flinn Furlong
       September 22, 2020
       Dedicated to humanity
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Invitation

Invitation

F-riends or enemies do come along too 
R-ise with me higher than yesterday.

E-asily seen here acknowledged by a wave
E-asily noticed there by a nod of the head.

D-esire actions that ring just and fair
O-nly free for the doing.

M-emories for all.

       Jeannie Flinn Furlong
       September 22, 2020
       Dedicated to humanity
Posted to Poetry Soup
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Robertson Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Beautifully done Jeannie.
Furlong Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Hello there Milton! Thank you so much! I appreciate your stopping by, and comments. Please hurry back! Cheers!
Blown Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 9:18 PM
...nice write......sounds like you grew up breathing in a small town at-most-cheer? .......stan sand
Furlong Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 7:09 PM
Hi thete! Thanking you for your nice comments! And, yes, I did gtow up in a small town, Grand Prairie, Texas...a small time about 30 from Dallas, Texas....now, a large town bumping city limits with Dallas. Your new friend, Jeannie
Hoffman Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 1:47 PM
A well written and uplifting poem, Jeannie.
Furlong Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Hi Franci! Thanks for coming by! You certainly got my message "to uplift" others! I enjoy hearing feedback as so many receive the message! Hurry back in January for more-to-come! Looking at 2021 as a new hope year!
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