David William Breidenthal Poet Haiku

Invisible Shadows

Took me a few minutes to write 7 haikus...here they are:

You left me hallow
I hope you know to let go
Go show some last glow

You like to bestow
Remorse and sighs of worries
Stress you shouldn’t feel

Distress I’ll throw out
If you'd just let me somehow
Hope away the doubt

Let the sun shine down 
Invisible shadows' shade
To drown out the frown

Disappointments dim
Our faith in dark times like these 
Sometimes, shame will win

I can’t completely
Help you unless you let me
Please know I still care

I will listen more
Be your hoped-for reflection 
Shun out the shadows

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Joseph May August 22, 2018 at 1:18 PM Chasing away shadows of doubt...Very nicely penned JW David William Breidenthal August 22, 2018 at 9:51 PM Thank you kindly! Have a great day, Joseph and I will make sure to read your poems! ^_^