Invisible Particles

I care less,
walking on plateau.
Now,
mind rejects the peaks.

A small patch of green,
I knead on ice
of firm orbs.
This sterile landscape starts a fire.

My hands knit a taciturn probe
to enter the inconceivable.

The particles sleep in metaphors
of a baked sky,
where the stars bleed every night.

The fear looms large.
I sit in the crevices of hurts
to reduce the dimensions of time.				


SATISH VERMA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Satish. Love, Carol
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August 16, 2010 at 10:12 AM
well penned...you have me thinking and getting inspired to write!! Thank you!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Another great write Satish from your gifted pen.. enjoyed your creativity today..with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:09 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..I especially like the next to last triolet..Keep the creative metaphoric pen flowing..Sara
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