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Invisible Children

I am a child, an invisible child. You don't know me, sir.

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Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/12/2010 6:34:00 PM

Madison! Your comments really made my day today. They were so detailed and I can tell my words touched you. I love comments like that every now and then, which is why I will continue to post those on yours when it applies. Secondly,I am really jealous at how you are deep with such few words all the time, i write these 3 or 5 stanza poems and you get the same skills level shown in 3 lines! lol Genius! Would you do me a favor and be the first to comment on my Angel (AKJ) piece?

John Rhinem

Date: 10/10/2010 2:22:00 PM

Smile? ~ "Yes," sadly within this our world this seems to often be the case although, what defines a child? ~ "Hello, 'Beautiful & Precious Madison Thomer!!!'" ~ Very profound thought by "Your Brightness;" as Always has been dear &, "Thank You" for "Your Treasures" com; a joy whenever I behold "Your Light!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful Day 'Dear, Precious Madison,' Filled With 'Happiness & Love;'" Bye!:) ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2010 3:30:00 PM

That is the way some children are treated.Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2010 1:19:00 PM

Very wonderful haiku with goof images, Madison