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I am quiet like a mouse. N ever raise my tone of V oice or express myself. I learned quickly to S upress self expression. I n case it incurred aggression. B ecause it was obvious you L iked me under your thumb and E motionally abusing someone.

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Date: 2/23/2017 10:04:00 PM
Wonderful lines and message of standing up for one's self, Jean...big congrats to you and hugs, Rhonda
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/1/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda.
Date: 2/22/2017 1:45:00 PM
Your work always speaks out, congratulations Jean...
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:53:00 PM
I was never one for sweeping things under a carpet Charlie. I can't tell you what a wonderful release of pent up emotions being finally able to express myself this way has been for me.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:52:00 PM
There you go Jean, thousand hugs xxx And congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 2/22/2017 4:48:00 AM
"Cead mile failte" Darren. Which means "a hundred thousand welcomes" to those thousand hugs. Thank you.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:49:00 PM
Well penned Jean,congrats!
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Date: 2/22/2017 4:44:00 AM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 2/21/2017 6:03:00 PM
That is horrible, dear Jean! But you turned the experience into a good poem - congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/21/2017 6:27:00 PM
It was horrible and thank you Agnes for stopping by.
Date: 2/21/2017 1:33:00 PM
I'm sorry that happened. You true beauty shines where your words didn't express.
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Date: 2/21/2017 2:18:00 PM
No wonder I still search for my soul mate Tim.
Date: 2/21/2017 1:15:00 PM
- I think you can speak for yourself, Jean - The little "mouse" is dead :) - You are not "a lion" ... but you know exactly where the closet shall stand :) - Well written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2017 1:23:00 PM
Hi Sunshine! Your lovely comments always brighten my days. Thank you.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:34:00 AM
Jean, I can picture you many ways but quiet is not one of them:) Nice acrostic:)
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Date: 2/21/2017 11:27:00 AM
Not nowadays Danny, but there was a time when we were in company together, I never spoke. Hard to believe I know.

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