Invisible

Mental

I have an invisible friend
I really must confess
we're really comfortable together
except when I undress

is it odd to be embarrassed
when you're really on your own
except for your transparent bud
who sees your junk and bum

You might say ah grow a pair
who cares if he sees it all
but it takes a lot of courage
to reveal your cock and balls

Not that he says a lot
is opinionated or judgemental
sometimes I think he is not there
sometimes I think I'm mental
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Nah... you're not mental, just normal. This is true to life I would say! at least to MY life!! Well done Declan. Best wishes, Keith
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:57 PM
DECLAN, this is a deep write.. LINDA
Turner Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Self intimidation pointing toward the lack of self confidence. Great write. I can't see you but you have a beautiful mind. Peace:)
Molloy Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:15 PM
thanks for that comment... just a quiche before breakfast :)
Whatley Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Rather profound - unique bit of personal expression there, Declan! I like the indecisiveness - gives this piece a lot of personality.
Molloy Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Maybe too honest on my behalf?
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