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Mental I have an invisible friend I really must confess we're really comfortable together except when I undress is it odd to be embarrassed when you're really on your own except for your transparent bud who sees your junk and bum You might say ah grow a pair who cares if he sees it all but it takes a lot of courage to reveal your cock and balls Not that he says a lot is opinionated or judgemental sometimes I think he is not there sometimes I think I'm mental

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Date: 2/19/2016 5:34:00 PM
Nah... you're not mental, just normal. This is true to life I would say! at least to MY life!! Well done Declan. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:57:00 PM
DECLAN, this is a deep write.. LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:06:00 PM
Self intimidation pointing toward the lack of self confidence. Great write. I can't see you but you have a beautiful mind. Peace:)
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Declan Molloy
Date: 2/18/2016 12:15:00 PM
thanks for that comment... just a quiche before breakfast :)
Date: 2/18/2016 9:13:00 AM
Rather profound - unique bit of personal expression there, Declan! I like the indecisiveness - gives this piece a lot of personality.
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Declan Molloy
Date: 2/18/2016 12:17:00 PM
Maybe too honest on my behalf?

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