Invisible

Ignorant to the favoritism; a desire to be special too Naïve to all the sarcasm and criticism; finding it easy to subdue Validity still not broken as I feverishly try to understand Insanely searching for something; waiting upon your command Silence numbs my body; reaching out for a delusion to hold Imperfect vanishing appearance; a love so wrongfully cold Brazen on the outside; while dying on the inside all alone Love is all I ever yearned for; not this affection carved in stone Eagerly waiting for a sign; will you see, or are you forever blind? © Stacy Lynn Stiles

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2013 11:49:00 PM

Hello Stacy, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

Matthew Horstkotter

Date: 6/8/2013 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured. Nice poem.

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/5/2013 9:55:00 AM

This is a powerful piece. I guess the only real question here is, how does the person (I won't immediately assume it's you) see themselves? Sometimes, one has to make themselves become noticed. Self-confidence is a key role in that. Excellently written!