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Asleep on a pavement Filthy and gaunt Empty bottle beside him Drowning demons that haunt Few teeth, hair matted No shoes on calloused feet Spirit beaten and broken Years living on the street Weathered, aged beyond his years His mind lost to the booze Alone, unseen, neglected Trapped ,afraid ,confused A precious young man full of life Until addiction robbed his soul Money for the next bottle Now, his only life’s goal Swore he would never be like him Now he lay ,tagged John Doe on a slab Cause of death…..Alcoholism Exactly like his dad!

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Date: 6/19/2024 10:12:00 AM
Sad to see it happening in reality on our streets. Communities are trying to help.
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Deb M
Date: 6/23/2024 1:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Jay! Debx
Date: 6/19/2024 8:54:00 AM
Dear Deb, Wow, so powerful!! I work in Center City, Philadelphia, as a mental health/D&A counselor. I see and felt every part of your poem. My dad also was a heavy duty alcoholic so it hit home personally for me. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/23/2024 1:49:00 AM
Thankyou Daniel…. Debx
Date: 6/19/2024 7:43:00 AM
Thats so sad to read about, addiction is a real disease one that needs help, and understanding for. Unfortunately so many go through this. Yet, not many can see the help they need. Very well written and delivered
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Deb M
Date: 6/23/2024 1:48:00 AM
Thanks sweet Inky….Debx
Date: 6/19/2024 7:16:00 AM
so sad, but such a common story, deb! well done...
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Deb M
Date: 6/23/2024 1:47:00 AM
Thanks Ilene…..really value your thoughts my friend! Debx

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