Invisble Ink

I drew a straight line,
I knew that person would cross...
called adolescence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 7, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Thanks for the reply on my comment
Aul Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:59 AM
You're very much welcome....... George
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July 4, 2015 at 8:58 AM
I enjoyed this one! Congrats.
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Thanks and congrats on your recent wins........ George
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Wonderful senryu George! Congrats on ur win!
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Thank you for reading my words and for your kind words.......... George
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:53 PM
GEORGE, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:49 AM
As always, thanks for reading my words....... George
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:29 PM
George, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Thanks and congrats on your wins in contests....... George
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July 3, 2015 at 5:05 PM
FANTASTIC one. Congrats on winners' list
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Thank you and I should be congratulating you for always being in victory lane........ George
Roper Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Thank you for the nice words of encouragement...... George
Lawless Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 12:14 PM
nice subtle twist in this one...
Aul Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thanks for reading it.......... George
Nance Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 5:42 PM
hmm nicely done, smart thinking!
Aul Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Thank you for your kind words....... George
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