Inverted Universe

what do i see now, 
everyone with the same vow,
everywhere i walk,
tragedy is the only talk,
every heart full of pain,
eyes full of rain,
disgust in the gesture,
cruel dirty brain!
dark lights,
shrinking sun,
worthless fights,
and dissatisfaction!
killers of the thoughts,
readers of the pain,
mad man's philosophy,
play behind the curtain!
haters' love fuss,
players' loss,
inverted world,
inverted universe!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 9:53 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:32 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
A  Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 1:22 AM
Anish, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
Sundara Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 5:51 PM
A very nice one....keep it up!
Finney Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 3:51 PM
nice
A   Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 5:24 PM
well a big welcoming for you Anish, your tittle was pretty capturing, enjoyed your write and hope to read more:),..P.D.
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November 16, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its very creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv.. be blessed this happy day...
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 7:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Anish. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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