Intrustions You Sing It
Struggling through the verses
Not remembering some of
The words
Crooning the parts
Which should
Be soothed over
Keeping smooth
When words should be
In expression
Not keeping the melody
With the words
Introductions lack meaning
The sound dry
Unimpressive
Ad unclear
Maybe someone
C an mimicking you
In the background
To make your sound
More clear.
Put meaning behind
I love you
So the tenors and alto
Can answer you
Need
We let the bass
Bring in the chorus
We hear you
Anticipate the
Choruses drawing near
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