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Intruder

She broke into the empty house
and felt someone was there;
ignoring that, she walked around,
but sensed a hostile stare.

From room to room she paced, and glanced 
behind her, all her hairs
on end. Too late she saw the form
that shoved her down the stairs...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/2/2023 4:15:00 PM
Jack, Well penned, I enjoyed the ending of this one, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 10/22/2023 7:09:00 AM
you sure made me smile with the ending Jack! hugs jan xx
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