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Introspection

I nner child looked back at me as I looked deep within N everland of candied childhood wishes and dreams T empting to just want to linger here R elishing in that sweet taste disappointment has yet to sour O h how time tempers some wants and desires S ome sugar does remain in the sediment, however P ossibility for dreams to be realized, still E ventually too much sugar is not good for any one C auses more than just enamel to rot T akes a mix of sweet, bland, and salty to make a life I t's a blend that enhances the spice of life O verstayed my welcome again N ight night Neverland, hello reality 6/24/16

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/10/2016 5:02:00 AM

Sweet, bland and salty....I like it! Good job here Dineen! MC

Daver Austin

Date: 7/6/2016 1:26:00 PM

"That sweet taste disappointment has yet to sour." Love, that line. daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2016 8:36:00 PM

sorry I have to hurry and make dinner and can't find a new one or old one I have not seen. If you can think of any you would like me to see, please let me know. What is your personal favorite, Dineen?

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 6/29/2016 8:06:00 AM

Bet dinner was tasty :). I think you've viewed them all, you offer a wealth of support Andrea, and I thank you for that. While I don't have a favorite, I appreciate when I can view my poetry with new eyes so to speak. After I read your comments on my piece Butterflies and the Sunrise, I was able to read that piece in a new light. So, I do thank you very much for that as well.