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Introspection

Inside, deep inside, at your window
Near the dim light and mystic shadow
Twinkle your moistened graceful eyes
Rustling leaves of moonlit memories
Opening the gates of many a garden
Sonnets of sobs and smiles of soul
Prayers fulfilled and prayers frustrated
Escalators toward hints from paradise
Calm cool cucumber slice on my eyes
Tranquil flames fostering faith and felicity
Inside I look and say what a universe
On the blurring border of light and dark
Nitroglycerin moments in a quiet refuge
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June 24, 2016
For the contest: Introspection – Acrostic
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 7/6/2016 10:00:00 AM
Way to go ..Congrats on your great work..Sara
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/6/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/29/2016 10:09:00 AM
Probir, congratulations on your win, your words are very moving. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/6/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Eve ...
Date: 6/29/2016 4:42:00 AM
Congrats Probir, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/29/2016 7:11:00 AM
Thank toy ...
Date: 6/24/2016 10:46:00 AM
Only what we could see with the eyes of the soul is real and your INTROSPECTION leads one towards that direction my friend, Probir, if this one of course, is able to discern the path! Excellent!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you ...

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