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Introspection

I gazed into my shadow only those who seek shall find I know the day I found myself was the day I lost my mind for I fell in love with madness that darkness of the soul those twisted mental corridors where sanity dares not go intentions innocent and evil I love the terror in your eyes when I feel your gaze upon me with that fear you can't disguise from the razor's edge of sanity I hear dementia's call let the world begin to slip away let madness consume us all

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Date: 12/27/2010 9:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lori. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 4:35:00 AM
really great rhyming John Henry Loving III
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Date: 12/26/2010 6:44:00 PM
This is a gem of a poem.Wonderful write.Thanks for your words at my work.
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Date: 12/26/2010 6:28:00 PM
Nice poem. Thank you for comment to my poem. I'm sorry your mom lost her dog. I also got Maggie to help with the pain when I lose my 15 year old dog Bandit.
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Date: 12/23/2010 9:20:00 PM
I love this. Awesome piece!
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