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Below is the poem entitled INTRO TO HEART BROKEN which was written by poet Great Jaja. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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So sad, now he is feeling very bad,
He felt his relationship could make him glad
But to think of that is just so mad

He ventured into the love adventure because of the superficial picture
Not minding the deep texture of the structure
Forgetting that only God has the true picture of the future

Sadly, he never searched the scriptures
So as to see this picture

Now, here comes his dreams, career, education, future in a puncture
Like a dying bird that has just been captured
Only waiting for the rapture

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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