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Stained glass Bleeds rainbow Over dust particles Of sun Rains colour On my head Deep organ Fists slam Feet stamp Pounds music Vibrato Rattles my stomach Voice booms Speaks words Incomprehensible To ears detached From reality Sadness, gaiety, Melancholy, questions Happiness, silliness States of mind Suddenly Devoid of meaning And feeling Intrinsic Disconnection Submersion In experience. *** Just one session of Mindful Meditation December 22, 2016

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Date: 12/22/2016 10:55:00 PM
Almost sounds like the church I used to go to! Great poem!
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thanks! :) You got that right, the fist 3 stanzas are from a church yep.
Date: 12/22/2016 8:38:00 PM
"States of mind Suddenly Devoid of meaning And feeling Intrinsic Disconnection" ... Very well written Darren... <3
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Clau :) It's how you should feel while meditating, but oh it's so hard to reach that state.
Date: 12/22/2016 9:02:00 AM
I see creativity screaming aloud! Darren. I give this a 7 soup rating.
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 11:22:00 AM
a 7? Thank you so very much, I am honoured :)

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