Darren White Poet Prose Poetry

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Intrinsic Disconnection

Stained glass
Bleeds rainbow
Over dust particles
Of sun
Rains colour
On my head

Deep organ
Fists slam
Feet stamp
Pounds music
Vibrato
Rattles my stomach

Voice booms
Speaks words
Incomprehensible
To ears detached
From reality

Sadness, gaiety,
Melancholy, questions
Happiness, silliness
States of mind
Suddenly
Devoid of meaning
And feeling

Intrinsic
Disconnection
Submersion
In experience.

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Just one session  of Mindful Meditation
December 22, 2016

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Browned Cents December 22, 2016 at 10:55 PM Almost sounds like the church I used to go to! Great poem! Darren White December 22, 2016 at 11:33 PM Thanks! :) You got that right, the fist 3 stanzas are from a church yep.

Claudia Polydoro December 22, 2016 at 8:38 PM "States of mind Suddenly Devoid of meaning And feeling Intrinsic Disconnection" ... Very well written Darren... <3 Darren White December 22, 2016 at 11:33 PM Thanks Clau :) It's how you should feel while meditating, but oh it's so hard to reach that state.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 22, 2016 at 9:02 AM I see creativity screaming aloud! Darren. I give this a 7 soup rating. Darren White December 22, 2016 at 11:22 AM a 7? Thank you so very much, I am honoured :)