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Intoxicating Expression

Like smooth salty notes of Gouda and an oaky buttery Chardonnay Your grammatical mastery of words compliments as they convey Relayed with a silky smoothness deep within you voice Our energy’s merged and mingled, lost I had no choice Your words a rare combination yet together hold such force Impacting my sweet smooth softness, with intensity of course Intoxicating the listener, providing a stimulating effect While captivating their emotions, intriguing yet so direct Taking them under the influence, enjoying the tequila sunrise Flowing with a Grey Goose vibe, as our distilled words fly Like aged smokey caramel whiskey, our words taste refined Together we just get better throughout endless time

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Date: 5/13/2022 9:29:00 PM
Yes, quite intoxicating Brenda, enjoyed!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:18:00 PM
James thank you
Date: 3/27/2022 10:29:00 AM
Oh my dear insane sissy, I am quite tipsy on your power of your poetry. Indeed, this romance is tasty and intoxicating. Your rhymes flow with the buttery smoothness of Chardonnay, and like the aged smoky caramel whisky, your poetry just gets more refined and better with time. So beautiful, it's made this sane one swoon.. Love ya.. your sane but word-drunk sissy lol! <3
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:15:00 PM
Oh sweet sissy thank you do much!;)
Date: 3/7/2022 3:38:00 AM
Here is the link to me reading this on SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/dTzRCQDZZThTkc699
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