Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Intoxicated By Experience

The balloons rise to their feet —
jamming figure-eights, skating
euphorically, confidently-hued,
sunny disposition of a marguerite.

The breathtaking discourse of song —
blooming a bouquet of memories, smile
stimulates his eyes and sparks my pulse,
plausible that the classroom’s where I belong.

The fairytale scene follows me outdoors
in chromatic color, scent of honeysuckle,
flittering of fairy wings and stardust, to my car.
I avoid red light, my intoxicated pedal to the floor.

6/3/2019
AN UPLIFTING FEELING Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Panagiota Romios June 9, 2019 at 10:49 AM Yaaa, Kim. This is indeed first place Panagiota Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2019 at 7:09 PM Thanks so much, my friend!

Geoffrey Brewer June 8, 2019 at 8:35 AM A perfect convincing personal expression of an uplifting experience. Delightful to read. Well done, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2019 at 7:09 PM Thank you, Geoffrey! :)

Ralph Sergi June 7, 2019 at 4:02 PM A beautiful poetic feast savored by morsels of chosen words. My compliments, KIM! Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2019 at 7:08 PM Thank you so much, Ralph!

Debjani Mitra June 4, 2019 at 8:32 PM A big congrats for this lovely poem shining as the winner Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2019 at 10:03 PM Thank you, Debjani!

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2019 at 3:12 PM Congratulations on your wonderful poem being honored for first place Kim. xxoo Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2019 at 3:13 PM Thank you, Connie!

Kurt Ravidas June 4, 2019 at 2:44 PM Wow! Please, accept my congrats on gold of golds, Kim. It's was intoxicatedly uplifting. J'aime) Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2019 at 2:46 PM Merci, mon amie! :)

Ann Gilmour June 4, 2019 at 12:19 AM Many congratulations Kim on your podium win with this beautifully uplifting poem! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2019 at 5:29 AM Thank you, sweet poet! xx

William Kelii Kekaula June 3, 2019 at 10:12 PM Let me add my voice to hearld congratulations for first place Kim, Cheers Indeed, Aloha William Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2019 at 10:14 PM Thank you, William!

Eve Roper June 3, 2019 at 9:47 PM Beautiful poem, Kim, congratulations on your fantastic win. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2019 at 10:02 PM Thank you, Eve! <3 Kim

Gershon Wolf June 3, 2019 at 9:20 PM How did I ever miss this one?! Congratulations to you, my friend, on your #1 top-drawer win in Line's 'Uplifting' contest. Well-deserved. ~ Gershon Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2019 at 9:27 PM Thank you so much! Feeling honored!

Panagiota Romios June 3, 2019 at 7:36 PM Good Lock..lovely piem Panagiota Xoxo Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2019 at 7:37 PM Thank you, Panagiota! Hugs...Kim

W.A. Cholt June 3, 2019 at 6:16 PM Plenty of colour and life to stimulate the senses. Best wishes for the contest. Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2019 at 6:32 PM Thank you, W.A.!