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Intoxicated By Experience

The balloons rise to their feet —
jamming figure-eights, skating
euphorically, confidently-hued,
sunny disposition of a marguerite.

The breathtaking discourse of song —
blooming a bouquet of memories, smile
stimulates his eyes and sparks my pulse,
plausible that the classroom’s where I belong.

The fairytale scene follows me outdoors
in chromatic color, scent of honeysuckle,
flittering of fairy wings and stardust, to my car.
I avoid red light, my intoxicated pedal to the floor.

6/3/2019
AN UPLIFTING FEELING Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2019

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Panagiota Romios Date: 6/9/2019 10:49:00 AM Yaaa, Kim. This is indeed first place Panagiota Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/9/2019 7:09:00 PM Thanks so much, my friend!

Geoffrey Brewer Date: 6/8/2019 8:35:00 AM A perfect convincing personal expression of an uplifting experience. Delightful to read. Well done, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/9/2019 7:09:00 PM Thank you, Geoffrey! :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 6/7/2019 4:02:00 PM A beautiful poetic feast savored by morsels of chosen words. My compliments, KIM! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/9/2019 7:08:00 PM Thank you so much, Ralph!

Debjani Mitra Date: 6/4/2019 8:32:00 PM A big congrats for this lovely poem shining as the winner Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/4/2019 10:03:00 PM Thank you, Debjani!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/4/2019 3:12:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful poem being honored for first place Kim. xxoo Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/4/2019 3:13:00 PM Thank you, Connie!

Kurt Ravidas Date: 6/4/2019 2:44:00 PM Wow! Please, accept my congrats on gold of golds, Kim. It's was intoxicatedly uplifting. J'aime) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/4/2019 2:46:00 PM Merci, mon amie! :)

Ann Gilmour Date: 6/4/2019 12:19:00 AM Many congratulations Kim on your podium win with this beautifully uplifting poem! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/4/2019 5:29:00 AM Thank you, sweet poet! xx

Hilo Poet Date: 6/3/2019 10:12:00 PM Let me add my voice to hearld congratulations for first place Kim, Cheers Indeed, Aloha William Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/3/2019 10:14:00 PM Thank you, William!

Eve Roper Date: 6/3/2019 9:47:00 PM Beautiful poem, Kim, congratulations on your fantastic win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/3/2019 10:02:00 PM Thank you, Eve! <3 Kim

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/3/2019 9:20:00 PM How did I ever miss this one?! Congratulations to you, my friend, on your #1 top-drawer win in Line's 'Uplifting' contest. Well-deserved. ~ Gershon Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/3/2019 9:27:00 PM Thank you so much! Feeling honored!

Panagiota Romios Date: 6/3/2019 7:36:00 PM Good Lock..lovely piem Panagiota Xoxo Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/3/2019 7:37:00 PM Thank you, Panagiota! Hugs...Kim

W.A. Cholt Date: 6/3/2019 6:16:00 PM Plenty of colour and life to stimulate the senses. Best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/3/2019 6:32:00 PM Thank you, W.A.!