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Intoxicated By Experience

The balloons rise to their feet — jamming figure-eights, skating euphorically, confidently-hued, sunny disposition of a marguerite. The breathtaking discourse of song — blooming a bouquet of memories, smile stimulates his eyes and sparks my pulse, plausible that the classroom’s where I belong. The fairytale scene follows me outdoors in chromatic color, scent of honeysuckle, flittering of fairy wings and stardust, to my car. I avoid red light, my intoxicated pedal to the floor. 6/3/2019 AN UPLIFTING FEELING Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 6/9/2019 10:49:00 AM
Yaaa, Kim. This is indeed first place Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Date: 6/8/2019 8:35:00 AM
A perfect convincing personal expression of an uplifting experience. Delightful to read. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey! :)
Date: 6/7/2019 4:02:00 PM
A beautiful poetic feast savored by morsels of chosen words. My compliments, KIM!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2019 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ralph!
Date: 6/4/2019 8:32:00 PM
A big congrats for this lovely poem shining as the winner
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2019 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, Debjani!
Date: 6/4/2019 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being honored for first place Kim. xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2019 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 6/4/2019 2:44:00 PM
Wow! Please, accept my congrats on gold of golds, Kim. It's was intoxicatedly uplifting. J'aime)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2019 2:46:00 PM
Merci, mon amie! :)
Date: 6/4/2019 12:19:00 AM
Many congratulations Kim on your podium win with this beautifully uplifting poem! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2019 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet! xx
Date: 6/3/2019 10:12:00 PM
Let me add my voice to hearld congratulations for first place Kim, Cheers Indeed, Aloha William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2019 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 6/3/2019 9:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Kim, congratulations on your fantastic win. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2019 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! <3 Kim
Date: 6/3/2019 9:20:00 PM
How did I ever miss this one?! Congratulations to you, my friend, on your #1 top-drawer win in Line's 'Uplifting' contest. Well-deserved. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2019 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much! Feeling honored!
Date: 6/3/2019 7:36:00 PM
Good Lock..lovely piem Panagiota Xoxo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2019 7:37:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/3/2019 6:16:00 PM
Plenty of colour and life to stimulate the senses. Best wishes for the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2019 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, W.A.!

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