Into the Woods

The woods have eyes that never close
   And sounds which echo in the night
 Its winds will haunt you as it blows
  As shadows slither in pale moonlight

 When footsteps are heard passing through
  The owl asks 'who who who'
 As a silhouette he spies
  Moving deeper into the woods; but why?
 
 And those whose fate with it are spun
   Will wander through its leafy realm
  And before the night unveils the sun
They slumber in the shadow of the elm

 The woods have secrets it has kept
   It knows where all the bodies are
 Into the woods intruders crept
  Their dark deeds done beneath the stars
             
 1-8-19
 Into the Woods Contest
 Sponsor: Silent One
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Roper Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Back wit a big congratulations on your win. :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Nicole Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Yes, the night holds many moments, and many sounds dance through the trees, as the wind moves. Shadows linger. I love the images you paint here, with your words. I can't help but softly sigh, with the "Owl" asking "Who, who, who" The owl holds a beautiful meaning for me. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Myteries of the woods are unknown..Nice take on the contest Jospeh.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
May Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thank you for my placement Silent One..
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Joseph.
Y. Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Hi Joseph, I agree with the below, you've such a well written dark write. I wouldn't want to go into the woods that you described. Well done. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 11:37 PM
Their dark secrets are kept secrets . Love the verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Love the dark take on the theme, Joseph, and your awesome rhythm and rhyme bring it home! Good luck in the contest :)
Staton Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 2:50 PM
I certainly would avoid the woods at night! Very nice poem!
Andresen Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 4:16 AM
- A little scary description ... great delivered to the contest, Joseph ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:46 AM
So true the woods hide many dark secrets. Good luck. Tom.
Brewer Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:21 AM
Excellent dark verse with traditional values of rhythm, rhyme, form and intriguing images that give a frisson of pleasure. Good one, Joseph!
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Beautiful sights and sounds in your poem Joseph..enjoyed reading it. My very best for a TOP win.
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