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Into the Woods

INTO THE WOODS A wolf entered the woods with waning sun. The thick of forest green and food besides. Before the moon fades out his life be done. For now the creature lurks where man resides. Out of the house, into the deep dark space, A young woman will meet her tearful fate — Teen’s milky white smile with a hairy face. Oh, she was charmed earlier by her date. But now the woods, its limbs and bark, so wrong. She turns to run. He howls and tears her dress. Another smile and sneer - her father strong - This pretty girl reclaimed...out of this mess. The moon revisits haunt of wolf’s dark plot and ivy shoes scold girl — dad keeps them taut. 1/7/2019 Silent One - sponsor

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Kim, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2019 12:00:00 PM
Thanks you, Eve!
Date: 1/14/2019 5:32:00 PM
A great fairytale presented in your well-written poem, Kim. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 1/13/2019 9:53:00 AM
Wolves and woods seem to go hand in hand..Great story telling Kim..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 8:12:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! Enjoyed writing for your contest!
Date: 1/13/2019 8:38:00 AM
Hi Kim, Great story telling. Good ending. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 8:12:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 1/8/2019 9:24:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim and quite a unique entry, a fairy tale for the woods theme. Reminded me a wee bit of Red Riding Hood.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 1/8/2019 8:09:00 PM
Wonderful Kim a sure win my friend!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Bobby!
Date: 1/8/2019 7:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem Kim..well written..a sure win for you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2019 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 1/8/2019 6:19:00 AM
Oh those wolves in the woods...good story; I can see the scene playing out.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2019 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 1/8/2019 5:01:00 AM
She had a lucky escape Kim, Woods are enchanting but can be full of dangers. Good luck. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2019 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 1/7/2019 8:20:00 PM
Ah, there is no better hero than your Daddy. I am so relieved she was saved. Good one for the contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! :)

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