Into the Unknown

Little birds flying
Flying with no wings
In the shadow of their cages
Into nothingness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Hossein, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 5, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Hossein, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Excellent pen ! I really enjoyed your piece dear friend . I wish you and your family a very Happy New Year! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."
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