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Into the Unknown

Little birds flying Flying with no wings In the shadow of their cages Into nothingness

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/13/2024 11:33:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 10:45:00 AM

Hossein, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 9:27:00 PM

Hossein, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/31/2014 7:16:00 PM

Excellent pen ! I really enjoyed your piece dear friend . I wish you and your family a very Happy New Year! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."