Into the Storm -- Part 1

INTO    THE    STORM     (PART  1)

A few drops predicting storm, large, heavy, hard.
Black clouds, low, hanging, turbulent.
Wind drops as a boxer lowers his guard,
Confident of the helplessness of an opponent
Facing the forthcoming fury omnipotent.

Waves, solid mountains of etched glass blocks
Swashing their black masses on the decks,
And she shivers with the shocks.
Bow crashes the watery wall ahead and checks.  
Shards of black mass assault faces and necks.

Drops fly from ropes stretched straight to snapping,
Decks awash with black glass’s foaming flume,
Wind has horizontal pennant frantically flapping,
Rain lashes the leeside scuppers full of foam:
As we plunge into the black heart of the storm.

(to be continued….)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 12:52 AM
What a very descriptive way of writing here, Sydney-- ok you left us hanging here!! Very timely read for me, too! Super congrats on your win :D
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 12:49 AM
Sydney, it's not free verse, but who cares. It's magnificent and I'm glad that I shared tenth place with you! Love the personification in yours. LUv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Very creative and expressive work..Congrats..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:41 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Dream On" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 6:23 PM
On this day of a hurricane.....this poem seems even more daunting!! Excellent way to describe a scary dream!! (I'll have to check out part II ) Congrats Syd!!
Babcock Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Would not want to be on a ship in that kind of storm. Nice descriptive write and look forward to reading part 2 love phyl
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