Jenish Somadas Poet Rhyme

Into the Ocean Soup

With tiny timid staggering steps I traverse,
Through a gate amid howling ocean of readings,
A whirly wind ringing rhymes of diverse,
Helps the ocean waves bringing tome of meanings.

Woven are these pages in poetic verse,
With bare threads of our deepest feelings,
You will find laughter, tears and remorse 
and words of wisdom, prayer and healings.

With throbbing heart, through the book in gaited horse,
Wandered, wondering mastery of poetic ceilings,
Burning my passion, poesy angels appeared in disperse,
Offering tortie trinkets and helping hands in my dealings.


Date of Entry : 20/04/20
Contest : 'Poetry Anthology add your stanza' Contest
Sponsor : Krish Radhakrishna

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Jan Allison May 3, 2020 at 11:31 AM you rhymed so beautifully to weave your poem in with Krish's lines many congrats Jenish:-) hugs Jan xx Jenish Somadas May 4, 2020 at 12:06 AM Thank you Jan for your delightful comment..

John Watt May 2, 2020 at 6:34 PM Jenish, very impressive win, congratulations. I like how you rhymed, especially with the italicized stanza. Some nice images; howling ocean and gaited horse. Well done ~ John Jenish Somadas May 4, 2020 at 12:05 AM Thank you John..I took it wrong.. John Watt May 3, 2020 at 2:00 AM I meant to compliment you for rhyming your final stanza with the rhyming words from Krish's stanza. It gave a nice continuity. Jenish Somadas May 2, 2020 at 11:51 PM Thank you John..I redirect your appreciation to Krish, since he wrote that beautiful letters in italics..

Krish Radhakrishna May 2, 2020 at 1:15 PM Superb! Congrats on your win! This was a difficult contest to judge because of the quality of poems that were submitted. I blew a kiss in to thin air, when I read yours! That charming! Jenish Somadas May 2, 2020 at 11:47 PM Thank you Krish..Thank you so much for bringing this mind blowing contest which helped me to think something different..

Shirley Hawkins April 22, 2020 at 9:03 PM A Beautiful Poem, passionate and wonderous thought-provoking a Fav for me... Good luck with the contest..... Jenish Somadas April 22, 2020 at 11:37 PM Thank you Shirley..You made my day bright with that Fav.. Takecare always..

Caren Krutsinger April 21, 2020 at 2:19 AM I adore this poem and especially this part: "A whirly wind ringing rhymes of diverse, Helps the ocean waves bringing tome of meanings." Wow! Jenish Somadas April 21, 2020 at 6:31 AM Thank you Caren for that delightful comment..Takecare always...

Vijay Pandit April 20, 2020 at 7:31 AM Lovely lines Jenish--you complement the theme well. Jenish Somadas April 20, 2020 at 8:03 AM Thank you Vijay for your support and delightful comment..Takecare..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri April 20, 2020 at 5:13 AM A superb poem with fine alliterative parts and said in great rhyme scheme, a fine add to the ocean of poetry. Kudos. Pls do read and comment my newest poem too. Jenish Somadas April 20, 2020 at 5:38 AM Thank you Zaynab for your delightful comment.. Yes, I will check for sure..Takecare..

Gershon Wolf April 20, 2020 at 1:22 AM You and Krish cooked up a potent dish! Very tasty! :) gw Jenish Somadas April 20, 2020 at 2:01 AM Thank you Gershon for your kind words..Takecare..