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Into the Night

Into the Night Down by the river where the tall grass hides everything, I hear you calling my name. Under the diamond sky, you dance into my soul. Rhythm and harmony navigate our flight, desire our fuel. We reach maximum altitude crashing into love; dance, my love; dance, my love. Gently we land down by the river where the tall grass hides everything, I wait to hear my name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 1:09:00 PM
Nicole,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Nicole Montez
Date: 9/8/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome. I'm a New York City girl, however, I made Maryland my adoptive state in 2001. I've written several poetry books and spoken word CD. In 2015, I created Words Out Loud; poetry workshop, which allows me to mentor children/adults. For my events/poetry readings stop by facebook/open closet productions. Looking forward in reading your work
Date: 9/7/2016 11:13:00 AM
Nicole, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/6/2016 2:18:00 PM
Great Poem.
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Nicole Montez
Date: 9/7/2016 12:31:00 PM
Hello G. Jay, thanks for the accolade. I've read your poetry...Powerful!

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