Into the Night
INTO THE NIGHT
an undertow
to hide
& ebb away or conceal
enclosed
stands absolute
in the light of day
has
taken its toll
so cannot sustain
&so shall go
its quest to share
to defend
with consuming fire
&
let unfold
who will subscribe
& console
a virtue lost
on
the way
nay
all
must share
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
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