Into the Deluge

My pants were soaked, my coat a’drip,
My boots were saturated;
With sheets of rain that sliced the sky,
I really should have waited.

The puddles on the corners
Most resembled roiling lakes.
Though I had an umbrella,
This was one of my mistakes.

I turned around before I even
Reached my destination,
The knowledge that at least I tried
A sorry consolation.

At home I toweled off and later,
When the rain was through,
I made it to the library – 
Today my book was due!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duggan Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:02 PM
Hi ilene how are you, this is another one of your masterpieces, as Peter said it has been a nightmare over here these last few weeks, could do with some of your rain at the moment take care..........Vera
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:06 AM
This is very enjoyable, Ilene:) I used to be a frequent visitor at the lending library and I hated missing any appointments there! Wish I still had more time for reading:( // paul
Bauer Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 3:03 PM
thanks, paul! i have to carve a bit of time out of every day for reading (as i do for writing a poem) or i'd go crazy.
Emu Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 11:06 PM
nicely done, good read. At least the book was returned. Cheers, Craig
Bauer Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 3:02 PM
thank you, craig! i hate returning books late but it was a bit crazy to attempt to get there during such a torrential rain. it all worked out, though...
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:09 PM
A soggy day. Hope the sun dries you out soon.
Bauer Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 3:01 PM
thanks, tim! it actually cleared up a few hours after i got soaked. i appreciate the comment...
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