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Into the Deluge

My pants were soaked, my coat a’drip, My boots were saturated; With sheets of rain that sliced the sky, I really should have waited. The puddles on the corners Most resembled roiling lakes. Though I had an umbrella, This was one of my mistakes. I turned around before I even Reached my destination, The knowledge that at least I tried A sorry consolation. At home I toweled off and later, When the rain was through, I made it to the library – Today my book was due!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/18/2016 11:02:00 PM
Hi ilene how are you, this is another one of your masterpieces, as Peter said it has been a nightmare over here these last few weeks, could do with some of your rain at the moment take care..........Vera
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:06:00 AM
This is very enjoyable, Ilene:) I used to be a frequent visitor at the lending library and I hated missing any appointments there! Wish I still had more time for reading:( // paul
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/18/2016 3:03:00 PM
thanks, paul! i have to carve a bit of time out of every day for reading (as i do for writing a poem) or i'd go crazy.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:06:00 PM
nicely done, good read. At least the book was returned. Cheers, Craig
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Date: 2/18/2016 3:02:00 PM
thank you, craig! i hate returning books late but it was a bit crazy to attempt to get there during such a torrential rain. it all worked out, though...
Date: 2/16/2016 7:09:00 PM
A soggy day. Hope the sun dries you out soon.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/18/2016 3:01:00 PM
thanks, tim! it actually cleared up a few hours after i got soaked. i appreciate the comment...

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