Into the Deep Place of My Heart

Into the deep empty place
That I call my heart.
It pounds so slowly
And it yearns for love.
My hearts call out for love
Goes unanswered .
My heart stops for a brief second…
To see if anyone
Will put their hands upon my heart,
To continue the beat of my heart
But no one comes.
Nobody reaches out to me
Nobody screams and shout for me.
I sit here desperately
And I cry, I cry tears of pain
But nobody comes to wipe those tears away.
I sit in a puddle of blood
With a knife in between my heart
Because I tried to pour out
The last few drops of love 
That I had inside of me.
If you walked into my heart
And you banged against the walls,
Then you would hear total silence
Because my heart is hollow
Because my heart is broken
And because the love is lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/23/2013 10:56:00 PM
Nas, you will find love again. the deep place in your heart, will shine and be found again... I hope these tears of pain are only a poem.. if not I wish to give a friendly smile and hug to your heart... love love Linda
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:29:00 AM
"tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"
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Nas Payton
Date: 7/4/2013 12:49:00 AM
Thanks::) I'm trying to enter it in the contest but none of my newest poems are being allowed.
Date: 7/3/2013 1:30:00 PM
Don't give up the search Nas...Love will find you when you least expect it. And thanks for the comment on my Sleepless Nights poem. Keep writing!
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