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Into the Dark Night

Love is an emotion we reverence from the start We have a predilection to bask in its light Consternation arises when love's fabric is torn apart And we are encompassed by apathy and its dark night, This feeling of unearthliness is one to dread Voices of condemnation are silent instead As the fires of discord ignite ---- 10-29-18 7 Lines, 7 Words Contest Sponsor: Lu Loo

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 8:01:00 PM

I see later this one got judged and you got a win. BIG congrats, Joseph. Merry Xmas to you. I hope to see new poems from you soon.

Joseph May
Date: 12/22/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..Merry Christmas..Hugs..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2018 9:32:00 AM

here to congratulate you on your fine win, joseph... huggs

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/1/2018 7:12:00 AM

Congrats on your gold medal win, Joseph.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/28/2018 1:02:00 AM

Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, Joseph - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/27/2018 1:51:00 PM

Love is a wonderful emotion indeed, and it is within us- yes, from the very start. Love overpowers Darkness. Light does. True love can overcome anything. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 11/27/2018 1:22:00 PM

Congratulation on your win, Joseph :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/27/2018 12:24:00 PM

You wrote about a very deep subject then aced it with fitted words. Congratulations on your 1st place win,

Charles Messina

Date: 11/27/2018 8:58:00 AM

Outstanding, Joseph! Well done and beautiful. Congratulations on your top win :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/27/2018 8:21:00 AM

Back to Congrats!!! Joseph...excellent win my friend...love & light...^WW^

Lu Loo

Date: 11/27/2018 7:28:00 AM

amazing poem all around sweet Joseph! I loved it so much. It brought chills down my spine. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo

Joseph May
Date: 11/27/2018 1:05:00 PM

Glad you liked it Luloo..Thank you so much for my top win..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2018 6:20:00 PM

I keep clicking on your poems and i've seen them all. Anyway, your writing is above par these days, joseph. You are being greatly inspired by the contests!