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NOTE:  I had found a stunning picture of a table overlooking the sea up on a hill (like an outdoor cafe table) with beautiful flowered bushes in the foreground and the town, sky and water in the background. I based my poem around this, with the intent to show the picture. Now no matter how many times I try, I simply cannot find that same picture among beautiful summer images on google! So you will just have to imagine it.

Into the Blue

I sit at a small table outside a café. Along a low orange wall, rows and rows of flowered bushes decorate the foreground of a breathtaking scene. Out to a horizon where sea meets sky is endless blue. I inhale perfect beauty! Fine wine and good food are on the way. Here in the sun I will revel in the fragrance of the red roses and the freshness of the air. A butterfly alights nearby me. How simple a thing yet how divine. Fly, Butterfly - Fly out to the bay! I wish to see how long I may keep you In my sight before you vanish into the blue. July 30, 2016 for Edward Ebb's Anacreontic Verse 4 Contest
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Anish Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 1:17 PM
I sometimes gaze at the waters of the Atlantic Ocean and sometimes the Pacific Ocean. I live near the East River - it is a great place to walk to. Fine wine and good food! well, probably would have green tea instead of wine. Did you know wine is part of the Jewish religion? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Parmale Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Lovely lovely imagery Andrea!!!I enjoyed it a lot!!!
Godwin Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 3:24 PM
A lovely poem to spend time with and, no worries, I could picture it ... CayCay
Daniel Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 8:01 AM
"A butterfly alights nearby me. How simple a thing yet how divine." Any image cannot match such descriptive words:) Lovely:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Andrea, I love the way you have us following the flight of the butterfly ending your poem. Superb my friend! #7 ; )
Peranteau Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:59 PM
You've certainly gave the not only beautiful visual of your missing table, yet the beauty surrounding your glorious moment in time! I state that you gave a beautiful visual of the table when you did not describe it in this write, yet I could not keep from visualizing it since you engrossed us with its true...*sm...much love girlie, james
Vaso Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 7:07 PM
So beautiful, I will say in this case a poem paints a thousand images!
Horsman Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 5:34 PM
your poem Andrea, a chart of serenity.
Kent Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 4:50 PM
You made it very easy to imagine.
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 12:51 PM
I saw the picture perfectly in my mind Andrea. This is so lovely
Austin Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 12:17 PM
This sounds like a Van Gogh cafe scene until you include the butterfly, a wonderful sensitive image that gives the poem lovely life. Love it, love it, love it. daver
Sathasivam Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Excellent. Simply beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 3:22 AM
I didn't need a picture Andrea you painted such a vivid image in my mind:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 6:20 PM
la dolve vita... wow, such is the magic of life, andie... you got the charm!.. huggs
Chircop Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 6:12 PM
How beautiful you write dear Andrea...You have a unique way with words..Words of beauty..that makes me think of an artistic painting as I read.Well done. (A small note re Dad..Dad was going to be dismissed out of hosp. On Monday but his heart was pausing for seconds..He fainted in front of me..They made him a pacemaker apart from the stent and was dismissed today..Thanks God.Thanks for prayers xx
Chircop Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 6:14 PM
A fave
Chircop Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Which make me think..Sorry for typo : )
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